August 11th, 2010, 10:30 pm

Thanks for reading Son of Sam

You're encouraged to leave me feedback, I'd like to hear what you like as well as what you don't
-Zachface

posted by zachface @ August 11th, 2010, 10:30 pm   2 comments

Comments:

Bcheesy87, November 22nd, 2010, 1:35 pm

Son of Sam I've just started reading and it's really fun so far. It reminds me sort of of scott pilgrim or octopuspie. I like the way it's being colored. The humor. Keep it up!

oven (Guest), October 21st, 2013, 10:54 pm

:T Started out with an interesting premise but the plot has slowed and stagnated - the scene with the characters asking each other personal questions is just exposition in disguise, and is lazy storytelling. :(

Avery is a painfully 2D character who has mysteriously fallen for random dweeb protagonist #647 without really forming any sort of basis of friendship or interest. The mystery surrounding her delinquency and homelessness is engaging, but you're short-changing depth of character for 'mysterious cool badass but sad' circumstances surrounding that character. It reads a bit like you're trying to write teenagers, but think their romances are easy/spontaneous/fun-filled days at the mall.

Stop pulling your punches. You could have a very gripping drama if there really *had* been a sex scandal with the headmaster, or if the 'dumb jock new kid' really WAS gay. If you're trying for a fun and light-hearted comic, then over-exaggerate to the point of cartoon violence and whimsy - THAT would be more like Scott Pilgrim.

I dunno. It's just watery and reading it I can tell the author/artist lost all interest in their idea, or had no set plan for the story in the first place.

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